The candle
(A poetic response
to “the metaphor” by Budge Wilson)
Candle,
Something can live
forever,
Somehow, it
chooses to light up itself.
The light is warm,
Soft,
But is also
attracting.
Everything around
is lighten by this tiny candle,
Everything around
enjoys the light,
And the candle is
happy even though it is burning itself.
The candle,
Keep burning,
Thinking that
everything enjoys the light.
The light is still
warm,
Soft,
But it is
repetitive.
Not everything
likes to be lighten up,
Not everything cherishes
the light,
And the candle shines
itself for nothing.
The candle,
Becomes smaller,
And it starts
crying.
Nobody understands
it,
And nobody cares
about it.
The wind blows,
And the last bit
of flame has been snubbed out.
Now there it
stands alone,
The remaining of that
candle.
good use of repetition!
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